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bg1: Any writers here? need critque

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5y, 8m agoPosted 5 years, 8 months ago
need someone to critique some articles i've wrote.

Im not a writer so i want to know if i have structured what i'm writing correctly, if it flows and comes across well.


can you post here if you want to read it, if poss can you tell me what you have which makes you an ideal candidate to read it :)

dont pm me, ill pm you :p

thanks
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5y, 8m agoPosted 5 years, 8 months ago
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[mod]#1
Have done a bit of writing BG1 - but I'm a harsh critic
#2
ok andy thanks, still brushing it up a bit, will give you a pm, also can you ban nikkib123 as she pm me just for the reaon of pming me when i said do not pm me.

I believe this is a breach or something or another :)
#3
black gerbil1
ok andy thanks, still brushing it up a bit, will give you a pm, also can you ban nikkib123 as she pm me just for the reaon of pming me when i said do not pm me.

I believe this is a breach or something or another :)


From reading that sentence I do not have high hopes for your 'article'
#4
Never mind his second post, the first one's not so hot on the old English!

Edited By: moomintroll on Mar 27, 2011 22:02
banned#5
black gerbil1
ok andy thanks, still brushing it up a bit, will give you a pm, also can you ban nikkib123 as she pm me just for the reaon of pming me when i said do not pm me.

I believe this is a breach or something or another :)


Or you could just put a nasty message up about her on a review site instead if you're feeling really clever and hard!
#6
what's a critque brah?
banned#7
What sort of article?

Is it a news story, an editorial, or an advertorial or just some public interest copy-writing for a brochure or magazine.


Edited By: slamdunkin on Mar 27, 2011 22:07
#8
slamdunkin
What sort of article an editorial and advertorial or just some public interest copy-writing for a brochure or magazine.


http://www.cbeebiesmagazine.com/
#9
the writing is about public information.
#10
is it to do with spelling?
banned#11
So it's informative rather the journalistic.

and what would be the format and target demographic the publication is aimed at?
#12
I just want to know if my writing flows, the underline message is getting across, Is there too much of one thing and not enough of something else. Just the intergirty of the writing peice, not bothred about spelling or gammer

the demographic is EVERYONE.
#13
black gerbil1
I just want to know if my writing flows, the underline message is getting across, Is there too much of one thing and not enough of something else. Just the intergirty of the writing peice, not bothred about spelling or gammer

the demographic is EVERYONE.

not bothred about spelling or gammer
just as well.
#14
Fancy asking for help with your GCSE course work
#15
why are people on here so mean to other humans, i dont understand it :(
banned#16
you can send it to me....I've had a book published that was ghost writen for me which sold over 100,000 copies....i'm not much of a speller, but my misses will proof read it for you if you like
#17
hi slamdunk, what is this ghost written?
1 Like #18
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk10/pauls7010/ATT16418.jpg
banned 1 Like #19
Ghost written means that an accomplished author took my story over a series of taped interviews and turned it into a book on my behalf. he then sent me the manuscripts for me to make any amendments to the story, which was then given to the publishing house and proof read, then returned to me for final approval before going to print.
#20
skusey
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk10/pauls7010/ATT16418.jpg




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black gerbil1
why are people on here so mean to other humans, i dont understand it :(

Not everyone. You mainly because you ask for it.
#22
I should try something else if I were you.

Written English is obviously not your star subject.

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