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Can someone please give me some help/feedback on my artilce

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6y, 11m agoPosted 6 years, 11 months ago
Lynx Hard Sell Article

Sometimes, I wonder what makes a perfect world. Would it be having a chocolate body, owning all the gold in the world or simply owning a spray that removes all the clothes of women. Now all you need is the Lynx bullet spray some of that naff urine in a tin and you are guaranteed to have the sexiest Latino women in leopard skin underwear seductively ready to thrust her pelvis up yours in a supermarket. For me it is a thinly advertised perfume and just because they named Bullet as well as adding some-half naked women in an advert, it doesnt make it any less girly! Imagine being caught using one in public (here is a tip; pretend in it an insect repellent).

Lynx have hit a new level in their campaign to prove that women will instantly smell Lynx and realise this a lonely ugly man so lets have hump him to make him feel a little better about themselves. So all you horny guys use some pocket pulling power. The last thing on earth I will be doing is walking into Superdrugs and spending £1.20 on 10 ml of cow musk. The girls are much hotter than the guys wearing lynx, well if using it means that you have wear undies like that prat on the ads well I aint using it thats for sure.
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6y, 11m agoPosted 6 years, 11 months ago
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urm....
#2
Punctuation and grammar could do with attention!
#3
wHY expired?
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Sometimes, I wonder what makes a perfect world. Would it be having a chocolate body, owning all the gold in the world or simply owning a spray that removes all the clothes off women. Now all you need is the Lynx bullet spray, some of that naff urine in a tin and you are guaranteed to have the sexiest Latino women in leopard skin underwear, seductively ready to thrust her pelvis up yours in a supermarket. For me it is a thinly advertised perfume and just because they named it Bullet, as well as adding some-half naked women in an advert, it doesnt make it any less girly! Imagine being caught using one in public (here is a tip; pretend it's an insect repellent).

Lynx have hit a new level in their campaign to prove that women will instantly smell Lynx, and realise this a lonely ugly man so lets make love to him, to make him feel a little better about himself around women,So all you horny guys use some pocket pulling power. The last thing on earth I will be doing is walking into Superdrug's and spending £1.20 on 10 ml of cow musk. The girls are much hotter than the guys wearing lynx, well if using it means that you have wear undies like that prat on the ads well I aint using it thats for sure.


I hope you dont mind i have made some minor adjusments.
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Sometimes, I wonder what makes a perfect world. Would it be having a chocolate body, owning all the gold in the world or simply owning a spray that removes all the clothes off women? Now, all you need is the Lynx bullet spray, some of that naff urine in a tin, and you are guaranteed to have the sexiest Latino women in leopard skin underwear, seductively ready to thrust their pelvis' up to yours in a supermarket.

For me it is a thinly advertised perfume and just because they named it Bullet, as well as adding some-half naked women in an advert, doesnt make it any less girly! Imagine being caught using one in public (here is a tip; pretend it's an insect repellent).

Lynx have hit a new level in their campaign to prove that women will instantly smell Lynx, and realise this a lonely ugly man so let's make love to him, to make him feel a little better about himself around women. So, all you horny guys; use some pocket pulling power. The last thing on earth I will be doing is walking into a Superdrug store and spending £1.20 on 10ml of cow musk. The girls are much hotter than the guys wearing lynx. Well, if using it means that you have to wear undies like that prat on the ads; I aint using.
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Any additions you would make
any interesting opinions on the lynx bullet?

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