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Couldn't sleep, so I wrote a lil poem...

pet3r Avatar
7y, 3m agoPosted 7 years, 3 months ago
Didn't take long, I just couldn't sleep.
Anyways, here goes, let me know what you guys think of it...

When we first met you seemed too good to be true,
I loved getting to know you as our friendship grew.
Hours felt like minutes when we were together,
Never in my life had anything felt better.
The parties we shared on those cold winter nights,
I could never forget in the rest of my life.
Those long phonecalls we made every day,
Often went silent because there was nothing to say.
We both shared feelings, but nothing was aired,
Couldnt risk our friendship, I was too scared.
At this time we knew there was something to be had,
The chances were never taken, driving me mad.
One of the biggest regrets of my time on this earth,
Has to be not trying to make it all work.
We drifted apart through no choice of mine,
Not sure it was yours, but our friendship declined.
All for no reason and nothing was said,
So many conspiracies ran through my head.
Phonecalls went unanswered time after time,
To my heart you commited the harshest of crimes.
Was it intended or was it a mistake?
I will never know as my heart slowly breaks.
And now we dont see each other, never mind speak,
My love is without a paddle drowning in the creek.
Save me, you wont from this horrible pain,
Is it really a loss, or is it my gain?
A day with you now would be to much to ask for,
Would you ever let me in, or keep closing the door?
Too many questions, too little time,
My emotions cant be expressed in this very short rhyme.
But if I had the chance to do start from scratch,
I would hide underground and lock the hatch.
I have one last question for yourself and Cupid
Did you do it because you didnt care or because I did?
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7y, 3m agoPosted 7 years, 3 months ago
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#1
:-(

Did you really write that?
banned#2
nice! aslong it wasnt a copy and paste or hatch job!

dude...MAN UP!

chriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

we have another depressed case on our hands! time to show em their worth!

hey pete....you are now a friend of chris and i...

we'll get you through this lad!
#3
kapows
nice! aslong it wasnt a copy and paste or hatch job!

dude...MAN UP!

chriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

we have another depressed case on our hands! time to show em their worth!

hey pete....you are now a friend of chris and i...

we'll get you through this lad!


Looooool!!!! :w00t:

What are you on tonight????? :whistling:

:p
banned#4
dmh77
Looooool!!!! :w00t:

What are you on tonight????? :whistling:

:p


hey i got skills!

you need to go back about a month in the photo thread lol me and chris and twix or "xwit" are undepressors - i made that up im workin on it lol
banned#5
dmh77
Looooool!!!! :w00t:

What are you on tonight????? :whistling:

:p


it was supposed to be you....:p
#6
kapows
hey i got skills!

you need to go back about a month in the photo thread lol me and chris and twix or "xwit" are [COLOR="Lime"]undepressors[/COLOR] - i made that up im workin on it lol


:giggle:

Lol, I think that the opposite of depression is actually mania...........? :?

Either way, you are funny! ;-)
#7
kapows
nice! aslong it wasnt a copy and paste or hatch job!


Yeah it was all me!

I'm no wreck either! Just the girl its about meant a lot to me and I do think about her every now and then..

I've not wrote any poems since I was at school (not that long ago, only 2 or 3 years) just my teacher was a b!tch and used to always downgrade my work if I put my name on it!! Just seeing what you lot thought of it!
#8
kapows
it was supposed to be you....:p


Oi!!! :x

Only 'cos cwis was pimping ....... :oops:
banned#9
pet3r
Yeah it was all me!

I'm no wreck either! Just the girl its about meant a lot to me and I do think about her every now and then..

I've not wrote any poems since I was at school (not that long ago, only 2 or 3 years) just my teacher was a b!tch and used to always downgrade my work if I put my name on it!! Just seeing what you lot thought of it!


LOL theres always a girl who is

most likely to cause depression

if ur still thining about her then she needs to begone!

she keeping you awake!

and i need another successful project!

you are now part of the project lol we need to get you girlssss not girl to think about YOU not the other way round :-D :-D
banned#10
dmh77
Oi!!! :x

Only 'cos cwis was pimping ....... :oops:


get cho azzzz over here woman!
#11
kapows
get cho azzzz over here woman!


I'm a bit worried that I could read that................... :thinking:

On my way...........
#12
kapows
nice! aslong it wasnt a copy and paste or hatch job!

dude...MAN UP!

chriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

we have another depressed case on our hands
! time to show em their worth!

hey pete....you are now a friend of chris and i...

we'll get you through this lad!


kapows
hey i got skills!

you need to go back about a month in the photo thread lol me and chris and twix or "xwit" are undepressors - i made that up im workin on it lol

It was fun back then! :-D
dmh77
Oi!!! :x

Only 'cos cwis was pimping ....... :oops:

You don't mind though!!

Nice Poem btw Danny!

edit: Sorry, Pete!
banned#13
cw9652
It was fun back then! :-D

You don't mind though!!

Nice Poem btw Danny!

edit: Sorry, Pete!


LMAO danny! could it be? LOL :-D

we gonna relive the fun n games hehehe
#14
kapows
LMAO danny! could it be? LOL :-D

we gonna relive the fun n games hehehe


It is about to hit 3am.... That is when the fun times started!!
banned#15
dmh77
I'm a bit worried that I could read that................... :thinking:

On my way...........


plenty more words to put in ur mouth :-D

shake it!!!
#16
cw9652
You don't mind though!!

Nice Poem btw Danny!

edit: Sorry, Pete!


How do you know I don't mind? :whistling:
#17
kapows
plenty more words to put in ur mouth :-D

shake it!!!


LMAO.... and I bet I could guess what those 'words' are.......... :whistling: :oops:
#18
dmh77
How do you know I don't mind? :whistling:


You would of said.......

In a very non flirty PM :-D
banned#19
dmh77
LMAO.... and I bet I could guess what those 'words' are.......... :whistling: :oops:


only one way to find out...pucker up :-D !
#20
cw9652
You would of said.......

In a very non flirty PM :-D


:p

You are damn right I would!!! :-D

I can't believe I am getting stick for NOT being flirty enough.... :thinking:

Isn't that what most of the women on here DO get stick for??? :oops:
#21
kapows
only one way to find out...pucker up :-D !


:w00t:
banned#22
dmh77
:w00t:


wide enough :-D :-D
#23
dmh77
:p

You are damn right I would!!! :-D

I can't believe I am getting stick for NOT being flirty enough.... :thinking:

Isn't that what most of the women on here DO get stick for??? :oops:


There is a rule......

(I forget the thread)......

It starts at 1 (That is a guy). Upto 100, that is ____________ DHW (Name your choice)!!

You are a current 2
#24
kapows
wide enough :-D :-D


:giggle:

They must be big words then! :thumbsup: :oops:
#25
cw9652
There is a rule......

(I forget the thread)......

It starts at 1 (That is a guy). Upto 100, that is ____________ DHW (Name your choice)!!

You are a current 2


What is DHW? :thinking:
banned#26
dmh77
:giggle:

They must be big words then! :thumbsup: :oops:


mmmmmmmmm hmmmmm mmmmmmmm :-D :thumbsup:
#27
dmh77
What is DHW? :thinking:


http://i33.tinypic.com/15efqzq.jpg
#28
cw9652
http://i33.tinypic.com/15efqzq.jpg


Loool... I watch it, but don't want to be one!!!! :w00t:

So spell it out.... what are you saying about me??? :whistling:
#29
kapows
mmmmmmmmm hmmmmm mmmmmmmm :-D :thumbsup:


Are you done yet??? :?
#30
dmh77
Loool... I watch it, but don't want to be one!!!! :w00t:

So spell it out.... what are you saying about me??? :whistling:


That you are currently 2, out of a possible 100 on the flirt stakes!! :)
banned#31
dmh77
Are you done yet??? :?


fiesty arent ya! we aint even got started :p
#32
cw9652
That you are currently 2, out of a possible 100 on the flirt stakes!! :)


Ok... that is pretty rubbish.... :?

But no body likes a flirt......... :)

( well, not one that doesn't intend to follow through? )

:)
#33
dmh77
Ok... that is pretty rubbish.... :?

But no body likes a flirt......... :)

( well, not one that doesn't intend to follow through? )

:)


Kapows will help you........ I tried, failed, looked at myself, felt I was doing something wrong, re-looked, then realised it was you!

;-)
#34
kapows
fiesty arent ya! we aint even got started :p


Looool, the contrasts in this convo are amazing.... I have cwis telling me that I am a man, and you are telling me that I am a feisty bird!?!?! :oops:
banned#35
dmh77
Looool, the contrasts in this convo are amazing.... I have cwis telling me that I am a man, and you are telling me that I am a feisty bird!?!?! :oops:


yes...a thinker maybe :thinking: :thumbsup:
#36
dmh77
Looool, the contrasts in this convo are amazing.... I have cwis telling me that I am a man, and you are telling me that I am a feisty bird!?!?! :oops:


kapows
yes...a thinker maybe :thinking: :thumbsup:


I didn't say you were a man.....

Just very similar:) :thumbsup:
#37
kapows
yes...a thinker maybe :thinking: :thumbsup:


Hmmmm.... maybe! ;-)
#38
cw9652
I didn't say you were a man.....

Just very similar:) :thumbsup:


Trust me... not 'very' similar...... :thumbsup:
#39
dmh77
Trust me... not 'very' similar...... :thumbsup:


Pics......... No other proof will make me think otherwise!! :)
banned#40
dmh77
Hmmmm.... maybe! ;-)


what you mean maybe...ofcourse...

i know what i get myself into...hmm that could have a double meaning loll :-D

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