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Guys who write poems

natversion1 Avatar
8y, 4m agoPosted 8 years, 4 months ago
Romatic or Wimpy?
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8y, 4m agoPosted 8 years, 4 months ago
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#1
what about option 3?
D-E-S-P-E-R-A-T-E?
#2
Depends on the poem ...:thumbsup:
#3
Just in general really doesn't have to be lovey dovey just wondered what the majority thought of guys as poets in general :)

it's been a very long time since anyone tried to punch me :)
#4
Romantic....different strokes for different folks :)
#5
Don't really like poetry unless it has real meaning. If it is slushy and sentimental, I steer clear of it. The poets of the past (Milton, Wilde, Hardy and Wordsworth) cannot be considered wimps.
banned#6
jellybaby22
wimpy...... i like guys who punch guys who write poems:p


:giggle::giggle::giggle:
#7
poems can be about anything not just 'lovey dovey' things, take this one i wrote for example.....

A chance I may be free.

In the shell of my entrapment,
Sitting by my cell,
Held against my will, I hate,
My own private hell,

Over there are all the warlords,
Plotting off my fate,
Filled with lost ambition,
Transferred into hate,

And I see a light above it all,
As small as it may be,
A glimmer of hope,
A flicker of life
A chance I may be free,

The sacred hall of ages,
Echo with lost words,
Policies and stages,
We gather there in herds,

The capsulated routine,
Of similarity,
Hacking at my aura,
I hide myself and scream,

And I see a light above it all,
As small as it may be,
A glimmer of hope,
A flicker of life
A chance I may be free,

My body has deserted me,
My mind is on the floor,
The primal instinct fills my veins,
The warlords are no more,

Regret is such an easy word,
But not all in life is hell,
As I realise my life,
Is lost, in a crueller cell,

So I saw a light
Above it all,
Bright as bright can be,
I’ve lost all hope,
I have no life,
I will never be free.
#8
Wii Expert - you're a happy chap aren't you!
#9
cheers! it's about my boss!!!!
#10
wii expert
cheers! it's about my boss!!!!


Thanks for the input, yeah I've been challenged to write all sorts from giant purple potatoes to fibreglass. There is still a bit of a stigma about poets.
#11
bellabonkers;2483044
Romantic....different strokes for different folks :)

What about the old adage "actions speak louder than words"? Thats showing they can talk the talk but can they walk the walk and back it up?
#12
harlzter
What about the old adage "actions speak louder than words"? Thats showing they can talk the talk but can they walk the walk and back it up?


Obviously said by someone who couldn't write :thumbsup:
#13
I think it's lovely - off now x
#14
Bet she's still here really.:whistling:
#15
Deek43
Bet she's still here really.:whistling:


How you guess?:-D
#16
Poetry is all about how well you can use a thesaurus.
#17
Deek43
Bet she's still here really.:whistling:


Lol awesome guess, she loves us :thumbsup:
#18
leefal
Poetry is all about how well you can use a thesaurus.


I thought dinosaurs are extinct :thumbsup:
#19
harlzter
What about the old adage "actions speak louder than words"? Thats showing they can talk the talk but can they walk the walk and back it up?


I've got magnetic poetry on my fridge and one bf used to rearrange the words all the time, was always a good giggle and kinda sweet of him. I think i want the best of everything, perhaps thats why i'm single lol
#20
"I wandered briskly down the road, and suddenly stepped on a toad" any good?
#21
Mine OH can write poetry, but won't write it for me - so at least you had "the best" for a while:thumbsup:
#22
masterbrown
"I wandered briskly down the road, and suddenly stepped on a toad" any good?


lol, there's a chance for you yet!!:p
#23
masterbrown
"I wandered briskly down the road, and suddenly stepped on a toad" any good?


Not the worst i've ever heard

What about this:

"Oh frettled gruntbuggly thy micturations are to me | As plurdled gabbleblotchits on a lurgid bee
Groop I implore thee, my foonting turlingdromes
And hooptiously drangle me with crinkly bindlewurdles,| Or I will rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon, see if I don't!"
#24
natversion1
Not the worst i've ever heard

What about this:

"Oh frettled gruntbuggly thy micturations are to me | As plurdled gabbleblotchits on a lurgid bee
Groop I implore thee, my foonting turlingdromes
And hooptiously drangle me with crinkly bindlewurdles,| Or I will rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon, see if I don't!"


Lovely - but I don't understand a word lol
#25
natversion1;2483223
Obviously said by someone who couldn't write :thumbsup:

Ive been known to write the odd ditty, but thats when the walls and fences seperated me and my "beloveds" of the time to keep them sweet, walls and bars leave plenty of time to fill
#26
hannah19790
Lovely - but I don't understand a word lol


Lol it's from the Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy. I could send you a poem but it would be in PM because I trust ya :thumbsup:
#27
When I was young, I would call them wimpy. But now that I am old...I wish I can write poems...
#28
Loo forward to it
#29
hannah19790
Loo forward to it


Loo? it's not THAT bad ;-)
#30
lol. LOOK forward to it
#31
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Always browsing to find a great steal
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I got a bargain..look at me :)

A bargain to be seen and be had
I don't wanna miss it , will feel so sad
Oh the money I have saved tiz quite a lot
When I grab the bargains from the top

My money is running low yet again this week
Loging onto the forum..will never end my treats
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#32
GerryG
I log in the evening to hotukdeals
Always browsing to find a great steal
Deals and deals are plenty too see
I got a bargain..look at me :)

A bargain to be seen and be had
I don't wanna miss it , will feel so sad
Oh the money I have saved tiz quite a lot
When I grab the bargains from the top

My money is running low yet again this week
Loging onto the forum..will never end my treats
Oh ban me please cause I am so skint
No money left for bargains oh well I'll make a mint :)


Beautiful brought a tear to my eye! :)
#33
natversion1
I thought dinosaurs are extinct :thumbsup:


You think he saw us?
that be....dinosaurus?
one tried to explain,
but deeply in vain,
that a thesaurus was not a creature from the triassic period.
#34
Lol i had a go:

The Great Divide:

Good day lesser being
i must say
Bad luck is not the only thing
you bring today

its not that i dont care anymore
its just that i never did

you tried to grasp your life
it slipped away
although i wouldnt care
either way


Money, knowledge, you know its true
its the great divide between me and you

its about something!

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