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My Poem

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8y, 3w agoPosted 8 years, 3 weeks ago
After a chat with my OH about who to invite for xmas tea ( well invite to mums house lol) we got talking about xmas isnt always a happy time for people etc.. which lead me to write a little poem..
Im no poet mind, but thought you may want to hear it?
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8y, 3w agoPosted 8 years, 3 weeks ago
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#1
come on nutty, share with us :) xx
#2
Would love to hear it
#3
That really rhymes:)
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Snow Capped Trees,
Glistening Morning Dew,
Sounds of Childrens excitement
unveiling their gifts of new

Merry Christmas echos
Greetings of nods with smiles
Christmas joy capturing the morning,
an epidemic stretching for miles

Slowly i walk passed a frosted window
I see man with a saddened glare,
I stopped to absorb his loneliness
not on christmas, its not fair.

The world around me continued their celebrating,
as i pushed open the coffee shop door,
hestitantly moving closer,
kneeling down on the dust wodden floor.

In his fingers he held a photo,
I gently wiped away a tear,
how cruel someone to be hurting
On this special day of the year.

I took his hand and whispered,
" Today you wont be alone"
His eyes closed with suspicion and wonder,
as I lead him to my family home.

Mr Lloyd lived just 6 doors down
Yet i knew not of my neighbours face
Nor was i aware his wife had passed,
So today will be his amazing grace.

His eyes moist with happiness,
His frown softened to a smile,
I could tell the sound of laughter
was a noise he'd not heard in a while.

Mr lloyd left late that Christmas Evening,
A different man who'd previously stepped over my door,
Just a simple act of kindness,
Made my neighbour a stranger no more..
#5
hope you like it
xxx
#6
Nice :thumbsup: well written
#7
awwwwwwwww that was lovely, im a soppy sod, made me all tingly xxxxxxx
#8
i was thinking of writing one to read out to my OH on our wedding just before we take the vows?
#9
pcnutta
i was thinking of writing one to read out to my OH on our wedding just before we take the vows?


I think you should, you obviously have a way with words and it would be something you will always remember :)
#10
pcnutta
i was thinking of writing one to read out to my OH on our wedding just before we take the vows?


That sounds like a great idea, tell your OH how YOU feel
not just read the vows, they dont reflect true feelings people have for their OH
#11
That is lovely Nutty and stirred the emotions
#12
That's lovely. Hate to be pernickety but Mr Lloyd changed name by the end?

Is it based on truth?
x
#13
beautiful .....
#14
mr Lloyed???Mr jones??? male lovers???help identity crissis
#15
im gonna b honest with u and say ur no way near on my level....ask others...it was good tho........u shud read a few of my raps on here tho...ull learn alot

*waits for ppl to confirm*
#16
jellybaby22
confirmed...it was ur kill the other day:-D


haha knew u wud own up at last....cheers jb! i forgive u for lying!

x
#17
curvy_chicka
That's lovely. Hate to be pernickety but Mr Lloyd changed name by the end?

Is it based on truth?
x


LOL i know, tooo funny, i called him mr lloyd on my first attempt, then mr jones on my second... then transfering it to here i got confused!

its semi based on truth in a sort of way, I spend one xmas feeding the homeless. Going out to them on the streets. Best experience ever.

xx
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acecatcher3
im gonna b honest with u and say ur no way near on my level....ask others...it was good tho........u shud read a few of my raps on here tho...ull learn alot

*waits for ppl to confirm*


Thanks for that, however I dont claim to be at any level. I did it for pleasure, not to climb a ladder.
:?
#19
Got goosebumps all over
#20
pcnutta
LOL i know, tooo funny, i called him mr lloyd on my first attempt, then mr jones on my second... then transfering it to here i got confused!

its semi based on truth in a sort of way, I spend one xmas feeding the homeless. Going out to them on the streets. Best experience ever.

xx


awww, thats such a lovely thing to do :thumbsup:
#21
pcnutta
LOL i know, tooo funny, i called him mr lloyd on my first attempt, then mr jones on my second... then transfering it to here i got confused!

its semi based on truth in a sort of way, I spend one xmas feeding the homeless. Going out to them on the streets. Best experience ever.

xx


rep added, lovely poem.
xx

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