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    a poem

    For me today is a great day
    Undeniably the best
    Cant you see dont make me say
    Kevin was his name i think i need to rest

    You need to understand
    Only you can make me stare
    Underneath you are grand

    The animal fur we shall never ware
    Will only make us turn to dust
    An emptyness wear no one cares
    Tin and iron shall never rust
    So read this aloud and change the world is poem is a must

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    For me today is a great day
    Undeniably the best
    Cant you see dont make me say
    Kevin was his name i think i need to rest

    You need to understand
    Only you can make me stare
    Underneath you are grand

    The animal fur we shall never wear
    Will only make us turn to dust
    An emptyness wear no one cares
    Tin and iron shall never rust
    So read this aloud and change the world is poem is a must

    Original Poster

    thanks

    kylejohns;5637527

    thanks



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    mbgringo;5637517

    For me today is a great dayUndeniably the bestCant you see dont make me … For me today is a great dayUndeniably the bestCant you see dont make me say Kevin was his name i think i need to rest You need to understand Only you can make me stareUnderneath you are grand The animal fur we shall never ware Will only make us turn to dust An emptyness wear no one cares Tin and iron shall never rustSo read this aloud and change the world is poem is a must



    What are you highlighting with your bold text?

    Oh I see!!!!

    mbgringo;5637517

    For me today is a great dayUndeniably the best[COLOR="Red"]Can't[/COLOR] … For me today is a great dayUndeniably the best[COLOR="Red"]Can't[/COLOR] you see dont make me say Kevin was his name [COLOR="red"]I[/COLOR] think [COLOR="red"]I[/COLOR] need to rest You need to understand Only you can make me stareUnderneath you are grand The animal fur we shall never wearWill only make us turn to dust An [COLOR="Red"]emptiness[/COLOR] [COLOR="Red"]where[/COLOR] no one cares Tin and iron shall never rustSo read this aloud and change the world is poem is a must

    [COLOR="Red"]It's a terrible poem, TBH.[/COLOR]

    Original Poster

    so no ones seen the message in it then

    Yes, but it was funnier to pick on your terrible spelling, acrostic poems are so passé
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