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    Go to the website in the next post and tell me what you honestly think.

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    link dnt work pal

    It looks like a web page from 1998.

    It looks like it was thrown together in five minutes by a child

    Amateurish

    Looks ok.
    Can you make a hyperlink to the albums when users click on the pictures of the album covers on the homepage, that would be helpful

    I'm guessing your learning HTML, so its a good start.

    Original Poster

    lol alot of bad feedback, fair enough, what i reli want to know is whether it is easy to navigate around and user friendly.

    oooo that looks nasty.....bout year 7 media/ICT project level IMO too much happening, too many colours, nothing matches, grammar is seriously bad! really wouldnt trust it at all (if it required payments etc...)

    looking at the link being ac.uk...I hope this isnt your uni project :?

    I think it looks alright, very colurful although the blue writing on the black background was difficult to read for me.. or it might be just my eyes lol

    Any reason every word start with a capital letter?

    Poor. Sorry! You're at uni (I presume from the ac.uk) and I did something better for my GCSE IT project! Start again!

    Original Poster

    nah im at college, its not a uni project.
    i know its not the best, all it needs to be is easy accessible and user friendly and i get the grade for it.
    the reason for all the bright colours is because i wanted them to be like neons so it matched the style of the albums and music.

    Kinda hard on the eyes, the red text against the black background aint the best.

    Maybe use a different font to sharpen up the text to make it easier on the eye.

    Well I didn't know Dizzee had 4 albums!!

    BradyBrade!;6926547

    lol alot of bad feedback, fair enough, what i reli want to know is … lol alot of bad feedback, fair enough, what i reli want to know is whether it is easy to navigate around and user friendly.



    maybe you should have said that my previous post was purely on the design of the webpage....

    OK im bored....will have a play around on it and figure out what I like/dislike..

    -the homepage link at the left-I would delete this and put the homepage at the top as the hyperlink....most companies have their logo as a link back to the homepage
    -is the paragraph top left of the album pages really needed.....the page should tell the user what its about :?
    -I know you asked about the user friendly aspect but that font is impossible for me to read! only read the first line of each para and noticed you need to proof read and sort out the spelling mistakes
    -I dont get the "Click The Links Above Or Hover Over Each Album To Be Taken To A New Page About Dizzee Rascal " direction....hovering over the albums doesnt do anything!
    -only other thing I would say is if its meant to be a 'fan site' type thing I would include a guestbook type page but that would obviously need to have some degree of moderating

    HTH

    ohhh also dont really see why you need to tell people what the website is for......(although I suspect your 'teacher' has told you to make the aim clear or something like that) either way, does it need to be said twice on the homepage alone?

    Original Poster

    lil_tiger;6926627

    maybe you should have said that my previous post was purely on the … maybe you should have said that my previous post was purely on the design of the webpage....OK im bored....will have a play around on it and figure out what I like/dislike..-the homepage link at the left-I would delete this and put the homepage at the top as the hyperlink....most companies have their logo as a link back to the homepage :)-is the paragraph top left of the album pages really needed.....the page should tell the user what its about :?-I know you asked about the user friendly aspect but that font is impossible for me to read! only read the first line of each para and noticed you need to proof read and sort out the spelling mistakes :)-I dont get the "Click The Links Above Or Hover Over Each Album To Be Taken To A New Page About Dizzee Rascal " direction....hovering over the albums doesnt do anything!-only other thing I would say is if its meant to be a 'fan site' type thing I would include a guestbook type page but that would obviously need to have some degree of moderatingHTH



    thanks for the feedback!
    ill take them into consideration.

    Banned

    baffledsalmon;6926571

    Poor. Sorry! You're at uni (I presume from the ac.uk) and I did something … Poor. Sorry! You're at uni (I presume from the ac.uk) and I did something better for my GCSE IT project! Start again!



    What's with you, arrogance of you sometimes, I think it's really good better than what I could do, I think it's really good, and would look excellent after some work put into it.
    Where do I sign up for newsletter's lol .

    Nice job btw :thumbsup:

    Original Poster

    dj_urban;6926658

    What's with you, arrogance of you sometimes, I think it's really good … What's with you, arrogance of you sometimes, I think it's really good better than what I could do, I think it's really good, and would look excellent after some work put into it.Where do I sign up for newsletter's lol .Nice job btw :thumbsup:



    thanks, nice to have SOME positive feedback with all the negative feedback, but oh well.

    I think for a college project this has got the foundations laid.

    You definitely need to change the font; maybe calibri or verdana, and you just need to tidy the layout a little, and perhaps change the colour scheme. But its a good start. its got potential :thumbsup:

    EDIT: the grammar needs sorting out too

    Original Poster

    hdizzle;6926685

    I think for a college project this has got the foundations laid.You … I think for a college project this has got the foundations laid.You definitely need to change the font; maybe calibri or verdana, and you just need to tidy the layout a little, and perhaps change the colour scheme. But its a good start. its got potential :thumbsup:



    cheers!

    dj_urban;6926658

    What's with you, arrogance of you sometimes, I think it's really good … What's with you, arrogance of you sometimes, I think it's really good better than what I could do, I think it's really good, and would look excellent after some work put into it.Where do I sign up for newsletter's lol .Nice job btw :thumbsup:



    I'm speaking from personal experience. If I handed this in for GCSE I would have been told to start again. Let alone A level or degree! Perhaps my school was just pickier.

    i appreciate that it is a college project so i will not compare it to pro websites, but do check your grammer, spelling and capitalisation (unlike me):

    "This Website Will give you Lots Of Information On Dizzee Rascal"

    BradyBrade!;6926679

    thanks, nice to have SOME positive feedback with all the negative … thanks, nice to have SOME positive feedback with all the negative feedback, but oh well.



    take it on the chin.....feedback on projects generally is negative as its easier to pick fault than to praise dont take it personally....everyone is trying to help you in their own way otherwise they wouldnt have looked and given their opinion......just have a play around and with a few changes Im sure it will look fab

    Original Poster

    nah, i aint taking it personally, just, wow, my teacher said it was very good...but ok.

    ascen;6926726

    i appreciate that it is a college project so i will not compare it to pro … i appreciate that it is a college project so i will not compare it to pro websites, but do check your [SIZE="4"]grammer[/SIZE], spelling and capitalisation (unlike me):"This Website Will give you Lots Of Information On Dizzee Rascal"



    :giggle:

    the irony

    Check your grammar

    And Not Every Word Needs A Capital Letter

    Original Poster

    I realise not every word needs a capital letter, however i did this to give it a certain style, plus it was reccommended by my teacher, who granted is a ****

    BradyBrade!;6926547

    lol alot of bad feedback, fair enough, what i reli want to know is … lol alot of bad feedback, fair enough, what i reli want to know is whether it is easy to navigate around and user friendly.




    Nice and clean, easy to navigate, though I can't say I'm a big fan of the font (Bauhaus ?)

    B+ :thumbsup:

    BradyBrade!;6926779

    I realise not every word needs a capital letter, however i did this to … I realise not every word needs a capital letter, however i did this to give it a certain style, plus it was reccommended by my teacher, who granted is a ****



    hmmmm regardless...the teacher is the one who marks it and gives you the grade....perhaps save a copy of the original....then do the changes, take BOTH to the teacher and ask what they think is best cant lose then :thumbsup:

    Sorry OP, the black background makes it unpleasant to look at.

    Try something kinder on the eyes.

    Dizzee Rascal.. Who?
    Oversized clothes with an under developed mind..

    Not a fan of the dark colours or how the text shifts when you switch from homepage to any other option either.
    On the plus side the links seem to work.

    On the contact form it says "Enter Your Comments In The Box Below And Then Select E-Mail!"
    I assume this means the submit button?

    Picture links only seem to work if you click bottom half of the picture.

    Clicking the album does nothing, unless you click on the man himself.

    smidav;6926827

    Clicking the album does nothing, unless you click on the man himself.



    maybe that was intended?

    smidav;6926827

    Clicking the album does nothing, unless you click on the man himself.



    Oh, just noticed that..
    Don't like it

    Also, why is "Tongue N' Cheek" in bold text?

    hdizzle;6926863

    maybe that was intended?



    Maybe it was, but it should be stated in that case.

    the font needs changing hard to read xx

    Hi
    I know nothing about computer programming. My main opinion from the link was the type face was very hard to read. It seemed to dance about and made my eyes go funny. Apart from that I wouldn't say it looked like a website from circa 1998 as others think

    "Click The Links Above Or Hover Over Each Album To Be Taken To A New Page About Dizzee Rascal "

    I'm Still Hovering.... When Exactly Will I Be Taken To A New Page? :whistling:

    are you using just base html or are you allowed to use an editor such as dreamweaver etc if so good try if just base if its dreamweaver then well anyone ANYONE could of done better i could do a decent one with flash etc interactive within 15mins and have it all set up etc try harder m8 ;-) but good attempt if just base
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