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    After a chat with my OH about who to invite for xmas tea ( well invite to mums house lol) we got talking about xmas isnt always a happy time for people etc.. which lead me to write a little poem..
    Im no poet mind, but thought you may want to hear it?

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    come on nutty, share with us xx

    Would love to hear it

    That really rhymes:)

    Original Poster

    Snow Capped Trees,
    Glistening Morning Dew,
    Sounds of Childrens excitement
    unveiling their gifts of new

    Merry Christmas echos
    Greetings of nods with smiles
    Christmas joy capturing the morning,
    an epidemic stretching for miles

    Slowly i walk passed a frosted window
    I see man with a saddened glare,
    I stopped to absorb his loneliness
    not on christmas, its not fair.

    The world around me continued their celebrating,
    as i pushed open the coffee shop door,
    hestitantly moving closer,
    kneeling down on the dust wodden floor.

    In his fingers he held a photo,
    I gently wiped away a tear,
    how cruel someone to be hurting
    On this special day of the year.

    I took his hand and whispered,
    " Today you wont be alone"
    His eyes closed with suspicion and wonder,
    as I lead him to my family home.

    Mr Lloyd lived just 6 doors down
    Yet i knew not of my neighbours face
    Nor was i aware his wife had passed,
    So today will be his amazing grace.

    His eyes moist with happiness,
    His frown softened to a smile,
    I could tell the sound of laughter
    was a noise he'd not heard in a while.

    Mr lloyd left late that Christmas Evening,
    A different man who'd previously stepped over my door,
    Just a simple act of kindness,
    Made my neighbour a stranger no more..

    Original Poster

    hope you like it
    xxx

    Nice :thumbsup: well written

    awwwwwwwww that was lovely, im a soppy sod, made me all tingly xxxxxxx

    Original Poster

    i was thinking of writing one to read out to my OH on our wedding just before we take the vows?

    pcnutta;3475898

    i was thinking of writing one to read out to my OH on our wedding just … i was thinking of writing one to read out to my OH on our wedding just before we take the vows?



    I think you should, you obviously have a way with words and it would be something you will always remember

    pcnutta;3475898

    i was thinking of writing one to read out to my OH on our wedding just … i was thinking of writing one to read out to my OH on our wedding just before we take the vows?



    That sounds like a great idea, tell your OH how YOU feel
    not just read the vows, they dont reflect true feelings people have for their OH

    That is lovely Nutty and stirred the emotions

    That's lovely. Hate to be pernickety but Mr Lloyd changed name by the end?

    Is it based on truth?
    x

    beautiful .....

    mr Lloyed???Mr jones??? male lovers???help identity crissis

    im gonna b honest with u and say ur no way near on my level....ask others...it was good tho........u shud read a few of my raps on here tho...ull learn alot

    *waits for ppl to confirm*

    jellybaby22;3476261

    confirmed...it was ur kill the other day:-D



    haha knew u wud own up at last....cheers jb! i forgive u for lying!

    x

    Original Poster

    curvy_chicka;3476175

    That's lovely. Hate to be pernickety but Mr Lloyd changed name by the … That's lovely. Hate to be pernickety but Mr Lloyd changed name by the end?Is it based on truth?x



    LOL i know, tooo funny, i called him mr lloyd on my first attempt, then mr jones on my second... then transfering it to here i got confused!

    its semi based on truth in a sort of way, I spend one xmas feeding the homeless. Going out to them on the streets. Best experience ever.

    xx

    Original Poster

    acecatcher3;3476248

    im gonna b honest with u and say ur no way near on my level....ask … im gonna b honest with u and say ur no way near on my level....ask others...it was good tho........u shud read a few of my raps on here tho...ull learn alot*waits for ppl to confirm*



    Thanks for that, however I dont claim to be at any level. I did it for pleasure, not to climb a ladder.
    :?

    Got goosebumps all over

    pcnutta;3477680

    LOL i know, tooo funny, i called him mr lloyd on my first attempt, then … LOL i know, tooo funny, i called him mr lloyd on my first attempt, then mr jones on my second... then transfering it to here i got confused!its semi based on truth in a sort of way, I spend one xmas feeding the homeless. Going out to them on the streets. Best experience ever.xx



    awww, thats such a lovely thing to do :thumbsup:

    pcnutta;3477680

    LOL i know, tooo funny, i called him mr lloyd on my first attempt, then … LOL i know, tooo funny, i called him mr lloyd on my first attempt, then mr jones on my second... then transfering it to here i got confused!its semi based on truth in a sort of way, I spend one xmas feeding the homeless. Going out to them on the streets. Best experience ever.xx



    rep added, lovely poem.
    xx
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