Poem/rhyme help....?

Could somebody please help me, i want to put something in my hubbys xmas card. The criteria is stuff like missing you, see you soon, sentimental etc etc
Basically most know he's away working for 8 months...help needed!

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just write how you feel down hun and maybe try and work out what words can be swapped, you have a unique style hun so something someone else has written just wouldnt work for you xxx

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ODB_69;3245587

just write how you feel down hun and maybe try and work out what words … just write how you feel down hun and maybe try and work out what words can be swapped, you have a unique style hun so something someone else has written just wouldnt work for you xxx


I ain't writing about my chuff! I took a picture for that......JOKE!!

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Lulu'sMammy;3245624

I ain't writing about my chuff! I took a picture for that......JOKE!!


be honest....



you aint joking are ya?!

ODB_69;3245587

just write how you feel down hun and maybe try and work out what words … just write how you feel down hun and maybe try and work out what words can be swapped, you have a unique style hun so something someone else has written just wouldnt work for you xxx



Agree, something written by you will mean more than any posh poem. try to add in some lil inside jokes, or the odd saucy secret, nice and personal, he'll love it.

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ChipSticks;3245633

Agree, something written by you will mean more than any posh poem. try to … Agree, something written by you will mean more than any posh poem. try to add in some lil inside jokes, or the odd saucy secret, nice and personal, he'll love it.




exactly and this woman's got more sauce than Heinz :whistling:

"My dearest Hubby, what can I say?
I miss you more and more each day!

Christmas is soon, we'll soon have each other,
But until then, I've still got your Brother! "

How's that ?

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8 month's, you are a good girl!

I think i would have ran off with the milkman after the first week x x

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Xb0xGuru;3245649

"My dearest Hubby, what can I say?I miss you more and more each … "My dearest Hubby, what can I say?I miss you more and more each day!Christmas is soon, we'll soon have each other,But until then, I've still got your Brother! "How's that ?



:w00t:

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Xb0xGuru;3245649

"My dearest Hubby, what can I say?I miss you more and more each … "My dearest Hubby, what can I say?I miss you more and more each day!Christmas is soon, we'll soon have each other,But until then, I've still got your Brother! "How's that ?


Actually, i like it muchly!!

Sorry haven't got one for your card but thought you might like this one anyway !!

[CENTER]frightened
Ive not had this before
My friend has had it 5 times
And said it can be sore
It was growing rather painfull
Tears formed in her eyes
It was hurting quite a bit now
It must have been the size
Calm yourself he whispered
His face filled with a grin
Try and open wider
So i can get it in
Its coming now he whispered
I know she cried in bliss
Feeling it deep within her now
She said 'please do not miss'
And with a final effort
She gave a frightened shout
He gripped at it in anguish
And quickly pulled it out
She lay back quite contended
sighed and gave a smile
she said im glad I came now
You made it worth my while
Now if you read this carefully
The dentist you will find
Is not what you imagined
Its just your dirty mind
[/CENTER]

Lulu'sMammy;3245665

Actually, i like it muchly!!



Thank you :-) Took me 2 minutes, if you couldn't tell already!

snowtiger;3245668

Sorry haven't got one for your card but thought you might like this one … Sorry haven't got one for your card but thought you might like this one anyway !![CENTER]frightened Ive not had this before My friend has had it 5 times And said it can be sore It was growing rather painfull Tears formed in her eyes It was hurting quite a bit now It must have been the size Calm yourself he whispered His face filled with a grin Try and open wider So i can get it in Its coming now he whispered I know she cried in bliss Feeling it deep within her now She said 'please do not miss' And with a final effort She gave a frightened shout He gripped at it in anguish And quickly pulled it out She lay back quite contended sighed and gave a smile she said im glad I came now You made it worth my while Now if you read this carefully The dentist you will find Is not what you imagined Its just your dirty mind [/CENTER]



:giggle: nice 1:thumbsup:

snowtiger;3245668

Sorry haven't got one for your card but thought you might like this one … Sorry haven't got one for your card but thought you might like this one anyway !![CENTER]frightened Ive not had this before My friend has had it 5 times And said it can be sore It was growing rather painfull Tears formed in her eyes It was hurting quite a bit now It must have been the size Calm yourself he whispered His face filled with a grin Try and open wider So i can get it in Its coming now he whispered I know she cried in bliss Feeling it deep within her now She said 'please do not miss' And with a final effort She gave a frightened shout He gripped at it in anguish And quickly pulled it out She lay back quite contended sighed and gave a smile she said im glad I came now You made it worth my while Now if you read this carefully The dentist you will find Is not what you imagined Its just your dirty mind [/CENTER]



If Lulu could be arsed writing all that on a card she would! haha!

Sorry lu, nice to see you again!

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[SIZE="6"]Your Angel[/SIZE]

[SIZE="6"]I say another prayer for you tonight,
To keep you safe and free from fright.
Remember, I am with you all along.
When you get lonely and sad inside,
I am right beside you, feel my pride.
I pray the Angels make themselves known,
For they will give you strength & bring you home.

written: 3/12/02 by B. Bee[/SIZE]

Just say, in your own way :
" I miss you more and more each day: I didn't know how much it would hurt to be apart from you and how I would long to be with you . I will love you for ever and cannot wait until I am in your arms again."

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Lol, have got something...bare in mind, i'm one funny lady, so it has to stay within them lines!
My dearest hubby, what can i say?
I miss you more and more each day.
Libby says hi, and so do the dogs,
and all four of us miss your sloppy snogs!
Try and have a good christmas, and we will too,
But for now, we will carry on missing you.
June is soon, and we will have each other,
but until then i'm humping another!

Lulu'sMammy;3245850

Lol, have got something...bare in mind, i'm one funny lady, so it has to … Lol, have got something...bare in mind, i'm one funny lady, so it has to stay within them lines!My dearest hubby, what can i say?I miss you more and more each day.Libby says hi, and so do the dogs,and all four of us miss your sloppy snogs!Try and have a good christmas, and we will too,But for now, we will carry on missing you.June is soon, and we will have each other,but until then i'm humping another!



loooooooooool

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Lulu'sMammy;3245850

Lol, have got something...bare in mind, i'm one funny lady, so it has to … Lol, have got something...bare in mind, i'm one funny lady, so it has to stay within them lines!My dearest hubby, what can i say?I miss you more and more each day.Libby says hi, and so do the dogs,and all four of us miss your sloppy snogs!Try and have a good christmas, and we will too,But for now, we will carry on missing you.June is soon, and we will have each other,but until then i'm humping another!



I'm sure he will love the last line :thumbsup:

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My bf is shaking his head in disbelief :-D

You are there
and I am here
thinking about how much
I love you
thinking about how much
I respect you
thinking about how much
I miss you

You are there
and I am here
thinking about how much
I cannot wait
until we are together again
thinking about how
I will appreciate
more than ever
the time
we will spend together
I love you

What about "I carry your heart, I carry it in my heart" by E.E.Cummings?

No jokes about the poet's name either please guys :o)

Really lovely poem, very soppy, my friend had it at a wedding.

Take it from me - Men don't like soppy poems in cards.

Be a little bit saucy, funny, sexy, etc and he'll love it - guaranteed

Lulu'sMammy;3245850

Lol, have got something...bare in mind, i'm one funny lady, so it has to … Lol, have got something...bare in mind, i'm one funny lady, so it has to stay within them lines!My dearest hubby, what can i say?I miss you more and more each day.Libby says hi, and so do the dogs,and all four of us miss your sloppy snogs!Try and have a good christmas, and we will too,But for now, we will carry on missing you.June is soon, and we will have each other,but until then i'm humping another!



Excellent except for the last line:
"Til then I'll just be the perfect mother."

Lulu'sMammy;3245850

Lol, have got something...bare in mind, i'm one funny lady, so it has to … Lol, have got something...bare in mind, i'm one funny lady, so it has to stay within them lines!My dearest hubby, what can i say?I miss you more and more each day.Libby says hi, and so do the dogs,and all four of us miss your sloppy snogs!Try and have a good christmas, and we will too,But for now, we will carry on missing you.June is soon, and we will have each other,but until then i'm humping another!



rofl, typical u, wheres he workin btw, he in army aswell?

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acecatcher3;3248014

rofl, typical u, wheres he workin btw, he in army aswell?


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