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    Someone created me a leaflet, just wondered if it would grab your attention? Would you read it etc?

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    Original Poster

    http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5356/leaflet.jpg

    the bottom looks a bit bare... so to speak.

    faevilangel;7204050



    Is that it?:?

    Gareth? I thought u were female???????:w00t:

    okay seriously - its nothing outstanding - your name is far too small and too much going on in the background

    bossyboots;7204073

    Gareth? I thought u were female???????:w00t:okay seriously - its … Gareth? I thought u were female???????:w00t:okay seriously - its nothing outstanding - your name is far too small and too much going on in the background



    Gareth is definitely male.... I can prove it :whistling:

    Where is it?

    ClarityofMind;7204079

    Gareth is definitely male.... I can prove it :whistling:



    Ahem!

    Original Poster

    bossyboots;7204073

    Gareth? I thought u were female???????:w00t:okay seriously - its … Gareth? I thought u were female???????:w00t:okay seriously - its nothing outstanding - your name is far too small and too much going on in the background



    It's only the layourt Will be getting the text done soon

    And yes I'm all male :whistling: You won't believe how many people think i'm female :w00t:

    ClarityofMind;7204079

    Gareth is definitely male.... I can prove it :whistling:



    Me too

    Gillman.......man from atlantis......bobby ewing.........dallas........shoulderpads........crystal carrington.
    Todays tenuous link, fill the space somthing or else people will be bored and drift off.....................as above

    Original Poster

    ClarityofMind;7204079

    Gareth is definitely male.... I can prove it :whistling:



    shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    choc1969;7204096

    Me too



    Swopsies??? :w00t:

    ClarityofMind;7204079

    Gareth is definitely male.... I can prove it :whistling:



    dont u worry about ur online reputation!!!

    OP u know I know ur a bloke lol - all them drunken msn gangbangs:w00t:

    faevilangel;7204104

    shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh



    hey if she can prove it too, I can say what I like...........lol

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    ADZ1478;7204101

    Gillman.......man from atlantis......bobby … Gillman.......man from atlantis......bobby ewing.........dallas........shoulderpads........crystal carrington. Todays tenuous link, fill the space somthing or else people will be bored and drift off.....................as above



    I should have made it obvious, I haven't had the text written yet ........ That's the actual layout /. background etc

    bossyboots;7204113

    dont u worry about ur online reputation!!!OP u know I know ur a bloke lol … dont u worry about ur online reputation!!!OP u know I know ur a bloke lol - all them drunken msn gangbangs:w00t:



    I think it's too late to bother!

    ..... and you're compromised too now.... lol

    wait a minute here.......

    http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5356/leaflet.jpg


    http://shop.maix.co.uk/ekmps/shops/kevinjmason/images/1kgsugar%5Bekm%5D204x300%5Bekm%5D.jpg

    Original Poster

    choc1969;7204096

    Me too



    evening choccy ;-)

    Original Poster

    bossyboots;7204113

    dont u worry about ur online reputation!!!OP u know I know ur a bloke lol … dont u worry about ur online reputation!!!OP u know I know ur a bloke lol - all them drunken msn gangbangs:w00t:



    moi? never .......... I'm innocent :whistling:

    makershaker;7204123

    wait a minute here.......


    I lol'd!!!!!

    ClarityofMind;7204121

    I think it's too late to bother!..... and you're compromised too now.... … I think it's too late to bother!..... and you're compromised too now.... lol



    ah but with me there is no evidence:w00t:

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    makershaker;7204123

    wait a minute here.......



    hahaha nice one :thumbsup:

    faevilangel;7204124

    evening choccy ;-)



    hey babes, your leaflet is a tad bland and looks like NHS colours :oops:

    bossyboots;7204142

    ah but with me there is no evidence:w00t:



    aww shucks.. you win.

    Fae put the evidence down :w00t:

    Original Poster

    choc1969;7204169

    hey babes, your leaflet is a tad bland and looks like NHS colours :oops:



    It was a freebie done for me :whistling:

    I dunno, i quite like it cos of the coding at the top.

    What would you add (remember the text will be where the blue is) ?

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    ClarityofMind;7204179

    aww shucks.. you win. Fae put the evidence down :w00t:



    i have no idea what you're on about woman :w00t:

    faevilangel;7204188

    What would you add (remember the text will be where the blue is) ?



    I'd add........ Tate and Lyle granulated sugar.


    Just think of the advertising money

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    makershaker;7204205

    I'd add........ Tate and Lyle granulated sugar.Just think of the … I'd add........ Tate and Lyle granulated sugar.Just think of the advertising money



    but think of the copyright claim i would be served with :?

    faevilangel;7204218

    but think of the copyright claim i would be served with :?



    stick summin sexy on it

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    ClarityofMind;7204237

    stick summin sexy on it



    send me a pc then :whistling::p

    i think its a good background, the coding is a pretty good idea original too id say, id make the bit with ur name the colour red tho just to change it up a little.....what info u gonna stick on the bottom bit?

    makershaker;7204123

    wait a minute here.......



    Wow @ observation skills

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    Jumpingphil;7204250

    What is with all the programming language in there?If people are coming … What is with all the programming language in there?If people are coming to you for web design, they are not going to know this language so that will just look gobbeldy gook to them and possibly put them off.Imagine if you picked up that leaflet and that was written in fifth order upper Mandarin, would you understand it? and would you then go and give your order to someone who had that on their leaflet?



    It's a background, as coding is what i do, the important bits are bolded to show them off.

    acecatcher3;7204255

    i think its a good background, the coding is a pretty good idea original … i think its a good background, the coding is a pretty good idea original too id say, id make the bit with ur name the colour red tho just to change it up a little.....what info u gonna stick on the bottom bit?



    Cheers Luke, I dunno yet, I know the blue area will have text, gonna have to add something to the bottom to be the attention grabber but not sure what. Maybe an image of a person holding my telephone number ?

    faevilangel;7204188

    It was a freebie done for me :whistling:I dunno, i quite like it cos of … It was a freebie done for me :whistling:I dunno, i quite like it cos of the coding at the top.What would you add (remember the text will be where the blue is) ?



    acecatcher3;7204255

    i think its a good background, the coding is a pretty good idea original … i think its a good background, the coding is a pretty good idea original too id say, id make the bit with ur name the colour red tho just to change it up a little.....what info u gonna stick on the bottom bit?



    Yea, some red will make it punchy......or a dark maroon :thumbsup:

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    choc1969;7204285

    Yea, some red will make it punchy......or a dark maroon :thumbsup:



    Cheers Luke and choccy, will have a play with it, see what I can do :thumbsup:

    The code at the top is a great idea. :thumbsup: When you add text and pic at the bottom half, it will look good. The shade of blue does look a bit NHS, can that not be changed?

    You like it dont you Gaz? Use it then xxx

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    Marina;7204309

    The code at the top is a great idea. :thumbsup: When you add text and pic … The code at the top is a great idea. :thumbsup: When you add text and pic at the bottom half, it will look good. The shade of blue does look a bit NHS, can that not be changed?



    thanks, yeah gonna play with the colours a bit.....

    CoM i like it, but it's about conversions lol. It may look good to me, but it's gotta look good to the readers etc.

    Thanks everyone for your views, it's made me aware what changes I can make. Once I have done them, i will post it again :thumbsup:

    no, the programming code is enough to put me off

    Deep purple shade I reckon would be better - and if u use the same sort of design I would agree with marina that you should have ur name in the bottom half - and only your name so its stands out

    All the best to you as I am also self employed so know how important this sort of thing is.

    best of luck

    Original Poster

    Jumpingphil;7204414

    Did you read what I said? Your reply doesn't seem to indicate you did.You … Did you read what I said? Your reply doesn't seem to indicate you did.You know coding and I know coding, but the chances are, someone who comes to you to design a website for them won't know coding.I just think that would put people off.Marina knows coding too so that may have influenced her comment.Those are just my thoughts. :thumbsup:



    Sorry it's late... been a long day lol

    I do believe it's a better approach than just a plain image, like a builder might put a picture of a roof...

    I am going to try the darker text, which will highlight the name etc more, see if that makes sense.

    This is mainly going to go to small businesses, so it might work

    Thanks for your opinion though, it's an eye opener :thumbsup:
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