Write the next line ............. Continue the next line of the story .........................................

Once upon a time, many many years ago there lived a .................

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.......A young lady called Lesleysherrock, she was part of a forum on Hotukdeals..........

..............only problem she was having was that every time....................

....she started a new thread on the forum........

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one day down in the deep dark dungeons of hotdeals lesley decided to write a story

... and this story was going to take the world by storm .... even bigger than a JK Rowling novel....

Lesley sat down to surf the net for some inspirational bargains...

..........The star of this story was a lovely little boy called harry nutter...............

... and that is where she came up with a fantastic plot for her new story, 'this is going to be amazing' she said, 'I'm going to be so rich I'll never have to use HOTUKDEALS ever again!!!'

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........ & Harry was a real star, you see he always ................

....swore after leaving the table at his parent's house....

...........but eat his tea and put all his toys away before bed time and just as he.........

.........finished doing this though, wasn't his only ritual, you see Harry also secretly was.........

...to sell ladies stockings on Ebay for a living...

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He remembered back to when he was young, the words echoed in his mind .. I've heard tales of goblins,
witches and ghosts,
but those blood sucking vampires
scare me the most.
They say that in graveyards
if you see an open tomb,
you better run fast
before you meet with your doom

... so yet again he sat down to watch an old Hammer House of Horrors film, well.. where else was he going to learn how to protect himself against those dreaded vampires living next door to him???

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even his cat pawprints was looking awfly pale these days... surely they wouldn't ! not the cat
His cat had been a precious companion for many years not a day had gone by that ............

so Harry was cautious when he went out that night
and dressed like a vampire and stayed out of sight
he boughta Pizza and started to walk
and low and behold, he heard a voice talk
as he turned the corner to his parents house
he fell over a vampire and turned into a mouse

lesleysherrock;1730816

even his cat pawprints was looking awfly pale these days... surely they … even his cat pawprints was looking awfly pale these days... surely they wouldn't ! not the catHis cat had been a precious companion for many years not a day had gone by that ............



he had not dressed his cat out and taken him for a walk at night

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Pawprints couldn't believe his eyes ! What should he do ? After all it was way past his dinner time .. He was so hungry but

couldnt get Harry to squeek I mean speak

come on Harry please please speak. Oh dear what can I do

... my bmx is parked outside but it has a flat tyre...

..........so I'd best find the nearest MacDonalds to satisfy my hunger and then call out the AA man, only trouble is.............

........he has broken down on the M6.........

...........so what is the next best line of action I wonder? I know I 'll go and...............

.......phone the RAC and see if they can help, otherwise........

......it will simply be a case for SuperSmithy!!!!!.........

suze;1732088

......it will simply be a case for SuperSmithy!!!!!.........



he he he he he :-D

........But, SuperSmithy is busy at the moment, so who we gonna call?..............

............nothing else for it then, will have to get "Jim to fix it"!.........

green flag of course

little bit out of sync here, ' said harry'

...........Jim said give him 5 mins and he is on his way..the problem he has , is that....

..........he can't drive!..............

but hes got a bike

..but has a flat...

....tyre, so the only course of action left to pursue now is .............

so he finds his skateboard

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& skates off down the road, until out of nowhere

...he hits a speed bump...

And breaks a tooth......
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